Nowadays many people travel to places where there are beaches and/or mountains. Both are wonderful places, however, they have disadvantages.
Firstly, the beach is a great place where you can sunbathe, suntan, go to the sea, take your pet and have fun with family or friends. But you can also get burnt if you don't put on suncream and in the sand, there are many insects! It could also be windy, and when it rains, you can't go swimming because the sea is dangerous, for instance..
On the other hand, mountains are great places to climb, and you can learn new things, experience different weather there, etc. At the same time , if you're climbing, you can fall or slip, and if it rains, you can't climb because the ground may be wet, so you can get hurt.
In conclusion, both are great places to learn new things and have fun, but they have complications. However, I think it's better to go to the beach because you can't get hurt as much as in the mountains.
Well done! it is well structured and organised. Don't use 'etc' so often. This is a formal text. When you finish, try to make clear you are talking about YOUR PERSONAL opinion.
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Hi! Maria.
ResponderEliminarI loved your essay, very interesting, but I prefer the mountains far less people and a more quiet place to rest. :)
Noe:
ResponderEliminarI prefer the mountains BECAUSE THERE ARE far less peipke and THE PLACE IS MORE QUIET to rest.