martes, 22 de abril de 2014

GO OUT OR INVITE YOU FRIENDS

In today's world, you have many possibilities to stay with your friends, for example, go out shopping, go to the cinema, or to a park. Or you can invite your friends to go to your house.

Nowadays it is normal (for teens) to go out, beacuse in a house they can't do the same thingas children do, and they can go alone (whitout any adults).

In conclusion, for teenangers it is more common to go outside, and the children stay at home playing different games. But if we have to decide which one is better, the ideal activity is to go outside, so at the weekends we aren't 'locked' in our homes.




1 comentario:

  1. Juli, it's much better. However, you can try using more adjectives for example to describe how teens feel when they stay at home for too long. Or what activities can be done when you don't go out. I'm talking about the second paragraph. Make clear differences between advantages and disadvantages in each case!

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