It is better playing sports in a club than at school: there is more time, space and it's safer. Firstly ,at school, physical education teachers can give you simple exercises to do, but in a club, they are more difficult because after them, players play matches. Secondly, you have an experienced coach. Maybe, the exercises and/or games are more difficult but we learn more and better. Also, at school, you have more time to rest and relax than in the club, where you can rest but not as well as at school.
In conclusion, playing sports at school is as good as playing in a club because they both have advantages. However, playing in a club could be more challenging.So why not trying?
María, in general, it is OK, but maybe you could have started giving a general view of the situtation. For example, 'Nowadays, children have different options to play sports. Most schools have physical education lessons, but they can also go to clubs. Which one is better¨?
ResponderEliminarAnd as for the order, maybe I would have written first the advantages of school (that in your text is only one) and then I would have described the club (which you like best).
but well done, anyway! it is our first article :)
Ok, I'll consider! Thanks
ResponderEliminarI think the same as you. Playing sports in a club is better to do sports at school.
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