Nowadays, the girls who are 15 years can go to Disney with her parents or her friends to celebrate their birthdays or can make a party with her parents, family and friends, and it lasts all night.
Firstly a lot of girls choose to make a party because it is funny and they can have a good time with lots of people they love. On that day you look like a princess because you wear an elegant dress, a crown, high shoes, and you dance all night. However, making the party is a bit expensive because you have to pay the lounge, the dress, the souvenirs and many other things.
On the other hand, some girls choose to travel to Disney and know the places that are there. Going to Disney is so funny and it is a great experience. You can go to the amusement parks and then go to the beach, you meet new people and their traditions, and speak in another language. But going to Disney is more expensive than making the party. Because you have to buy tickets, rent a room in the hotel, pay in dollars, pay for the food that you eat and pay for everything you want to buy!
In conclusion it is better to make the party because you live it once in your life, and going to Disney can be possible at any other time!
really original! I could never have thought of it.
ResponderEliminarWell-structured!
pay attention to the mistakes for today's exam!
but well done. I added a picture, you can change it if you want. :)
Hi Abril!
ResponderEliminarI agree when you say that you have to have a party because you live it once in your life! But then, going to Disney would be fun, great essay! -Maria.
Hi Abril!
ResponderEliminarI agree with you, but in my opinion, you can make a party and travel to Disney, if you make a small party with friends and family, and then with the money you save and you get as a gift your family, you can make a travel, according to what you decide!
Julieta.