miércoles, 10 de diciembre de 2014

Martina

 `Yes, I will give you five days to solve this, If you don´t solve it I will sell the building...´
The first night Nils was sitting on a chair in front of the sitting room when he heard a whimpering sound like a cat in pain (he thought). He checked all the top floor and when he was going down the stairs he found  a dead cat nailed to the wall with a trail of blood. He kept on walking until the trail ended showing a message written in blood that  said: `Be careful that the widow always keeps her promises´. He heard the laugh of a woman and he started to run out of the building. He got to the main door and called the police.
The second day he talked to the neighbours to know if they knew something about the history of the building. All the neighbours were very scared about it and everyone kept telling him to stay away from that building and then slammed the door in his face. Until one strange man told him the story of a woman who killed his husband because he cheated on her, and a few days later she hanged herself..but  one day before she died, the women screamed out loud that if any man dared to approach her building she would kill them all.

Because of this, Nils chose a police woman to join him in the case named Laura. That night Nils and Laura were walking around the building when suddenly someone took Nils from his jacket and made him disappear. Laura freaked out and looked for Nils but when she got to the top floor she found pieces of Nils´body  and his head nailed to the wall with another blood message saying: ´Who warns never betrays´ and Laura fainted.

1 comentario:

  1. wow! I'm amazed. Your story is bloody great! (literally bloody)
    I think it's the best writing you've ever done. congratulations

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