Martina
`Yes, I will give you five days to solve this, If you don´t solve it I will
sell the building...´
The first night Nils was sitting on a chair in front of the sitting room
when he heard a whimpering sound like a cat in pain (he thought). He checked
all the top floor and when he was going
down the stairs he found a dead cat nailed to the wall with a trail
of blood. He kept on walking until the trail ended showing a message written in
blood that said: `Be careful that the
widow always keeps her promises´. He heard the laugh of a woman and he started
to run out of the building. He got
to the main door and called the
police.
The second day he talked to the
neighbours to know if they knew
something about the history of the building. All the neighbours were very
scared about it and everyone kept
telling him to stay away from that building and then slammed the door in his
face. Until one strange man told him the story of a woman who killed his
husband because he cheated on her, and
a few days later she hanged herself..but one day before she died, the women screamed out loud that if
any man dared to approach her building she would
kill them all.
Because of this, Nils chose a
police woman to join him in the case named Laura. That night Nils and Laura
were walking around the building when suddenly someone took Nils from his
jacket and made him disappear. Laura freaked out and looked for Nils but when
she got to the top floor she found pieces of Nils´body and his head
nailed to the wall with another blood message saying: ´Who warns never
betrays´ and Laura fainted.
wow! I'm amazed. Your story is bloody great! (literally bloody)
ResponderEliminarI think it's the best writing you've ever done. congratulations